Question

某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社開辟了中學(xué)生習(xí)作專欄。本期的話題是：注重外貌日常學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中的細(xì)節(jié)。因?yàn)榧?xì)節(jié)往往決定成敗。請(qǐng)你以“we should pay much attention to details”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱囊恍┛捶ā?br />注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人相關(guān)信息。

Answer 1

Should Pay Much Attention to Details
Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing. Since we have realized the importance of details，what should we do? First， we should form the habit of being careful，because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more，we should learn to keep t he balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.
As far as I’m concerned，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first，without which quantity is of no significance.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文有些常用的詞組：form the habit of養(yǎng)成…習(xí)慣，keep t he balance of 保持平衡嗎，As far as I’m concerned據(jù)我所知，of no significance.不重要，還有范文還有很多好的句型：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句， We may find that when faced with lots of work，這句話用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make.這句話用了固定句型， Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了First，What’s more，這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。