分析 本篇書面表達屬于說明文,根據(jù)提示信息來介紹如何遵紀(jì)守禮.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài). 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu).比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on.是非謂語短語做狀語.only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.使用了倒裝句.此外,文章還使用了大量短語in my opinion,such as,last but not least,as far as I am concerned等.以及副詞besides的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感,也使語言更加連貫.
解答 Recently,there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion,both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.
China is a civilized country with a long history.(高分句型)Our ancestors attached great importance to"Li"-civilized behavior.Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.
As middle school students,we should be strict with ourselves.(高分句型)Firstly,we ought to respect the old and take care of children.Besides,we should behave ourselves,such as dining in good manners,waiting in line on many occasions and so on.(高分句型)Last but not least,we must obey school and society discipline,not cheating in exams.
As far as I am concerned,only when we all behave well,can our society be harmonious.(高分句型)
點評 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點.根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達的要點.設(shè)計好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等,把要點串聯(lián)起來,構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯誤.仔細閱讀全文,查找是否有錯,注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.
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