Question

你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學(xué)生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：
一、通常方式
1. 生日聚會
2. 生日禮物
3. 生日祝福
二、我認(rèn)為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由
﹡詞數(shù)：120左右

Answer 1

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.
Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。介紹的是中國學(xué)生過生日的方式，文章只是給出了簡單的大綱。在生日聚會的方式以及場所方面，做具體的介紹。在個人認(rèn)為有意義的慶祝方式時給出去多種方式。要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，使文章成為一個整體，同時使用高級詞匯和高級句型來提高文章的層次。
點評：半開放性作文的寫作要注意要點的梳理要到位，不能有遺漏。同時對考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分配文章的要點，運用高級詞匯和句型以及連接詞讓各要點連接成流暢的短文。