Question

某中學生英文網(wǎng)站發(fā)起了以“杜絕校園浪費”（Put an end to waste on campus）為主題的英語征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇應(yīng)征短文。

1. 描述你身邊的一些浪費現(xiàn)象；

2. 說明浪費的危害性及節(jié)約的重要性；

3. 反省你自身的浪費行為并提出改進措施。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

      2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

      3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。

Put an end to waste on campus

Nowadays wasting is common on campus. __________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Put an end to waste on campus

Nowadays wasting is common on campus. Water, electricity, paper and food are habitually wasted among many students, which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable.

If every student wastes a gram of rice and throws away a piece of paper every day, the total waste would be beyond our imagination. We all know that resources are running out. Even small resources, when used well, can help meet needs and aid development.

However, it’s easier said than done. Sometimes I myself waste money buying too much food. And there’re times I forget to turn off the lights before leaving the classroom. To change it, first, I’ll strengthen my responsibility to save resources, making the most of water, electricity and paper. Second, I’ll learn to save money, trying to be an economist. （124words）

【解析】試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)主題“杜絕校園浪費”（Put an end to waste on campus）寫一篇短文，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，需要學生用自己的語言形成連貫的文章。首先，描述浪費現(xiàn)象；其次說明浪費的危害；最后提出改進措施。使用第一人稱進行寫作，注意拼寫、標點和時態(tài)的正確使用。

【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重要語法知識：定語從句which, worse still, some of them consider acceptable；賓語從句We all know that resources are running out；省略when used well；非謂語動詞To change it, making the most of water, electricity and paper和trying to be an economist；諺語it’s easier said than done；固定搭配waste money buying too much food等，使作文的等級得到了提升；

范文使用了較多的短語：throws away, a piece of, worse still, beyond our imagination, meet needs, turn off等，充實了作文的內(nèi)容；

范文注意使用However, first, Second等來銜接上下文；使作文在結(jié)構(gòu)上顯得緊湊。

【考點】命題作文