Question

15．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

（請將情景作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
He is taking great trouble to①reach the top of the stairs，ignoring②the comparatively lower stairs beside him．
他正不辭辛勞地想爬到樓梯的頂部，而忽略了他旁邊的相對較低的樓梯．
①take great trouble to do sth 意為：不辭辛勞地做某事；
②ignoring為現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語．
句型二：
They are so eager to succeed that①they hope to get to their destinations as quickly as possible②．
他們是如此地渴望成功，以致于他們希望能盡快到達目的地．
①so…that 意為：如此…以致于…；引導結(jié)果狀語從句．
②as quickly as possible意為：盡快．

解答 In the picture we can see a boy climbing a platform．He is taking great trouble to reach the top of the stairs，ignoring the comparatively lower stairs beside him．【高分句型一】（簡述圖片的內(nèi)容，并指出其實質(zhì)）
The picture reminds me of those who dream of achieving great success every day．They are so eager to succeed that they hope to get to their destinations as quickly as possible．【高分句型二】They don't realize there are longer but safer ways for them to make it．As a result，they may seem rather close to their goals，but the fact is on the contrary．（舉例論證圖片所反映的實質(zhì)內(nèi)容）
In my opinion，we should focus on the process of fighting top success．As long as every step is proper，sooner or later we will gain what we long for．（表達自己的觀點）

點評 本題提供的是圖畫，主要考查考生的觀察力、思考力以及表達能力；因此要求考生應結(jié)合題目的要求，看懂了意思之后再進行寫作；具體做法是：首先，根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容整理出幾個要點，再根據(jù)這些要點決定要采用的語言形式，包括確定文中的人稱，時態(tài)以及選用相應的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，并且還要寫出自己的看法或感受．