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4．On the first day of her work，Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her．Six teachers had quit before her．When she walked in to the classroom，it was chaos：two boys were fighting in the far corner，yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them； some girls were chatting and some were running about； paper，food packages and other garbage were littered around…Just when she was about to speak，a student rushed in and pushed her aside!He was twenty minutes late!
Sally walked onto the platform，picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard："Rule 1：We are family!"All students stopped to look at her．And she continued with Rule 2，Rule 3…In the following weeks，Sally worked out 10class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom．She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them．
Surprisingly，Sally was not driven out like the former teachers； instead，she won respect from the students．Over the year，she witnessed gradual change in the class．At the graduation ceremony，just as she expected，she was very proud to stand with a class of care，manners and confidence．

[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．用約120個(gè)詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你們班最突出的問題是什么？
（2）針對(duì)該問題你會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)一條什么班規(guī)？
（3）你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會(huì)帶來(lái)什么影響？
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（1）作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
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概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本作文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這型作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過(guò)去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語(yǔ)：confronted with（面對(duì)），worked out（制定出），earned respect（贏得尊敬），lack of（缺乏），giving rise to（造成，導(dǎo)致），address the issue（處理事情）．

解答 Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class，Sally emphasized the idea of"we are family"and afterwards worked out 10 rules to regulate the students'conduct．Amazingly，she earned respect from her students，all of whom later grew to be confident，considerate and well-behaved．（概括）
       The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork．Everyone is minding his or her own business without the slightest attention to the people around．，thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the play of their potential．（問題）【高分句型】
        To address the issue concerned，I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students．【高分句型】The final presentation on the following Monday will be a result of group work．（班規(guī)）
        From where I stand，this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on students'academic performance．First and foremost，a harmonious but competitive interaction in a group will help everyone's learning．Additionally，we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other greater accomplishments．Last but not least，studying in group can share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently．It is for those reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit．（影響）
        With continuous efforts，our class，a big family，will compose an extraordinary harmonious symphony．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．