Question

19．假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營（the summer camp），歡迎各國學(xué)生參加．請寫一封電子郵件申請參加．內(nèi)容主要包括：
1、自我介紹（包括英語能力）；
2、參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）；
3、希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)110以上；
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．
Looking forward to your reply!
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：1、自我介紹；2．書信的目的；3．自己的英語能力；4．參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）；5．希望獲準(zhǔn)．
高分句型：
1．I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．句子里that引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞the announcement of the summer camp，做have posted 的賓語；am interested in 表示"對某事感興趣"．
我看到你們在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上發(fā)布的夏令營的通知，我對此很感興趣．
2．What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．句子里What's more表示"此外"； learn 和tell是并列結(jié)構(gòu)，做 be able to 的賓語；as well表示"也"．
此外，我能夠給其他國家的學(xué)生介紹中國并且也能夠了解他們的國家．

解答 One possible version
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．（自我介紹）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．【高分句型一】I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．（書信的目的）I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．（自己的英語能力）What's more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．【高分句型二】（參加意圖）I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．（希望獲準(zhǔn)）
Looking forward to your reply!
Faithfully yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
書面表達(dá)不僅反映在表達(dá)內(nèi)容上，也反映在書面形式上．一定要注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標(biāo)點符號，使別人看起來耳目一新，具有整體美感，從而提高自己的得分檔次．