Question

5．最近某英文報(bào)聯(lián)合你校對你市2001年到2011年家庭消費(fèi)變化做了一個調(diào)查．請據(jù)以下圖表寫一篇短文，作一文字說明，并就此發(fā)表自己的看法．詞數(shù)110左右．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food，expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008．
     該句在表達(dá)1998年到2008年期間，花費(fèi)增加時(shí)，使用了現(xiàn)在完成被動語態(tài)，即have been reduced；
（高分句型二）a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases，people can improve their living step．
改句式使用了被動語態(tài)，即a conclusion can be drawn；另外，that引導(dǎo)的從句為conclusion的同位語從句，指結(jié)論的內(nèi)容；
高級詞匯短語：grow to增加到；reduce to 減少到；draw a conclusion 得出…的結(jié)論；meet the basic needs．滿足…的需求；

解答 The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8，000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20，000 yuan in 2008．In the meantime，the structure of the average family expenses has changed，too．These graphs show the change clearly．
      The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing．In 1998，the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing．In 2008，expenses on housing rose to 42 percent．Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses．In 1998，about 18% of the average income was spent on this item．In 2008，the figure grew to 30%．（高分句型一）As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food，expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008．
      Thus，（高分句型二）a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases，people can improve their living step．But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．