Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I was shopping with my wife and we have plenty of things to buy. We drove to the centre of the city but stopped our car in front of a shop. An hour later, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we could open the doors. So we asked the policeman for help. He was glad to help us. a few minutes later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angry, “What are you doing with my car?” We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. It was not his. We were very embarrassed on that time. What do you think that we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man.

Answer 1

【答案】1.have—had

2. but—and

3. could not

4. policeman前的the 改成a

5.angry—angrily

6. surprising---surprised

7. his---ours

8. on—at

9. think后的that 去掉

10. speak 改成say

【解析】【整體解析】本文是一篇記敘文，主要講述了一對夫妻開車去市中心購物，他們把車停在超市前，等購物完回去開車時(shí)，卻打不開車門。隨后找警察幫忙，確開錯(cuò)車的一件生活囧事。

1第1處： “I was shopping with my wife and we have plenty of things to buy. ”根據(jù)was可知此句時(shí)態(tài)為過去時(shí)，由and可知前后兩句為并列句，因此，后句時(shí)態(tài)也應(yīng)為過去時(shí)。故將have改為had。

第2 處：“ We drove to the centre of the city but stopped our car in front of ashop.”我們開車到市中心并把我們的車停在超市前面。連接詞and 表示并列，所以前句與后句表示意思上的并列關(guān)系。故將but改為and。

第三處： “An hour later, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we could open the doors.”一小時(shí)后，我們回去開車，但是奇怪的是我們打不開車門。根據(jù)意思，可知前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折的意思，所以用否定could not。還有，根據(jù)后邊他們尋找警察幫忙，也可知道他們打不開車門。

第四處："So we asked the policeman for help. "此處的policeman 警察，是第一次在文中出現(xiàn)，并不是特指。故將the改成a。

第五處："Just then a man came up and shouted angry, "。副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，shouted是謂語動(dòng)詞，angry是形容詞。所以將angry改為angrily。

第六處：“We were surprising and went tosee the number of thecar.”

surprising表示某事某物使人感到驚訝，surprised表示人的感受，人感到驚訝。故將surprising改為surprised。

第七處："It was not his. "分析上下文意思，我們打不開車門和最后我們像那個(gè)男人道歉，可知這輛車不是我們的車。故將his改為ous。

第八處： “We were very embarrassed on that time.”我們在那時(shí)十分尷尬。此處考查了time的短語應(yīng)用，“在那時(shí)”應(yīng)為at that time。故將on改為at。

.第九處：“ What do you think that we did then? ”，分析句子，do you think是插入語，不做句子成分。What we did then接下來我們做什么，主謂賓都有，that多余，所以去掉that。

10第十處：“We had to speak sorry to the man.”我們必須給那個(gè)人道歉。speak后面跟賓語做及物動(dòng)詞時(shí),賓語一般是某種語言.如:speak English.speak本身是強(qiáng)調(diào)說話的方式.speak常用speak to sb。 而say后加的賓語是說話的內(nèi)容,say強(qiáng)調(diào)說話的內(nèi)容.