Question

假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom最近身體不舒服，來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他寫一些回信并提出建議。內(nèi)容如下：

注意合理飲食；

多參加體育鍛煉；

保證充足睡眠。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100個左右；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)， 以使行文連貫；

3. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you!

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you ask me how to keep healthy. I’d like to give you some advice.

As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need large quantities of nutritious food, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. You shouldn’t eat too much meat or too many sweets. Besides, it’s good for you to take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance, and as a result, I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late.

Only in these ways can you be in good health. I am hoping you will be better soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文，要求根據(jù)所給的內(nèi)容寫一封建議信。根據(jù)提示信息可知文章應該用第一人稱，要點包括：注意合理飲食、多參加體育鍛煉、保證充足睡眠和自己的建議等幾方面內(nèi)容。因為是建議信，要注意書信的格式，語氣要委婉。寫作時可充分發(fā)揮想象，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并且要達到要求的字數(shù)。此外，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯來提高文章檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達使用了三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段點明寫信的緣由，第二段給出三條建議，第三段表達自己的觀點。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，觀點鮮明，銜接詞“besides”“ what’s more”的使用讓文章更加流暢。Only in these ways can you…也讓文章增添了亮色。

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