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文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I went shopping in the center of the city yesterday afternoon. It was six o’clock before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of whom kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tries to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son went on crying. After a long time, a man seating next to the mother said angrily, “Why don’t you give the child what she wants.” The mother answered quiet, “I would if I could, and what he wants is your hat.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.

小題1:before ---- when
小題2:passenger---- passengers
小題3:were---- was
小題4:tries ---- tried
小題5:make 前加to
小題6:seating ---- seated
小題7:she ---- he
小題8:quiet ---- quietly
小題9:and ---- but
小題10:去掉of

試題分析：文章介紹作者昨天在公共汽車上看見的一幕，一個(gè)婦女帶著兒子，兒子突然哭起來，一個(gè)男子不耐煩，讓婦女給孩子想要的東西，結(jié)果男孩想要的是他的帽子。
小題1:句意：當(dāng)我乘公共汽車回家的時(shí)候是6點(diǎn)。before ---- when
小題2:句意：公共汽車上都是乘客。Passenger是可數(shù)名詞，后面用名詞復(fù)數(shù)： passengers
小題3:主語是A mother with her little son ，由with連接兩個(gè)主語，謂語和前面的一致：were---- was
小題4:這個(gè)故事是昨天發(fā)生的，yesterday ，用一般過去時(shí)：tries ---- tried
小題5:句意：媽媽盡力想讓兒子停止哭泣。 make 前加to，是不定式做目的狀語
小題6:seat是及物動(dòng)詞，the man和seat是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用 seated做定語
小題7:句意：你為什么不給孩子他想要的。指代the son用he
小題8:quiet 是形容詞，修飾名詞，quietly是副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞
小題9:句意：如果我能，我會(huì)給的，但是他想要的是你的帽子。表示轉(zhuǎn)折 and ---- but
小題10:hear做及物動(dòng)詞用是聽見，hear of“聽說”
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