Question

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華, 學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦了英語(yǔ)演講比賽，得到了外教Miss Smith的大力幫助。活動(dòng)圓滿結(jié)束后，請(qǐng)給她寫一封感謝信, 內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表達(dá)感謝；

2. 回顧外教的幫助；

3. 總結(jié)同學(xué)們的收獲。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右;

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Smith

I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success.It's so nice of you to have offered us a class of presentation skills and basic stage techniques. Under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance. Some students overcame the fear of acting in front of audience and gained tremendous confidence. Others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team. Most importantly, this activity has fueled our passion for English drama.

Many thanks for your time and support.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。文章要求考生給 Miss Brown寫一封感謝信，感謝她在學(xué)生會(huì)舉辦的英語(yǔ)戲劇節(jié)中提供的幫助。

這是寫給外教 Miss Brown的一封感謝信。文章話題比較貼近學(xué)生生活，所給要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)單，難度不大。因?yàn)槭歉兄x信，所以用于應(yīng)該禮貌客氣�？忌�可以先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示列出寫作大綱，首先應(yīng)該表示對(duì)Miss Brown的感激，可以選用 Thanks for,thankful/ grateful等字眼。其次，要明確 Miss Brown提供了哪些幫助；最后，要寫出同學(xué)們的收獲。第二和第三要點(diǎn)應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。列完大綱之后，對(duì)大綱進(jìn)行遣詞造句，細(xì)節(jié)等方面的擴(kuò)展�？梢钥紤]使用定語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、名詞性從句等。最后，可以用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將三個(gè)要點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)，突出文章的緊湊性和連貫性。