Question

【題目】你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:

1. 人物簡介；

2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫好。

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Answer 1

【答案】The person I respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1.人物簡介：

2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;

第三步：連詞成句

1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.

2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因

2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：As for; and; but; So

第五步：潤色修改