Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Tom要來(lái)南充參觀，想讓你給他推薦一家酒店。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封郵件:，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:

1.酒店的位置:

2. 推薦的理由；

注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫；

3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom.

I'm more than pleased to hear

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m more than pleased to hear that you’re coming to pay a visit to my city, Nanchong. Now let me recommend an affordable and comfortable hotel to you: Tianlai International Hotel.

Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarter’s drive from Nanchong Airport. As a result, it’s convenient for you to get around.

On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.

Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, you’ll feel free and at home. You are free to use WiFi and hot water is available all around the clock.

Wish you a happy stay here.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一封推薦信，是一篇提綱式作文，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第一步：審題：考生應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，把握文章中心，明確寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和所使用時(shí)態(tài)。這是一封推薦信，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.酒店位置；2.推薦理由。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意一些句式和短語(yǔ)的使用，寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意一些連接詞和過(guò)渡句使用，使上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

第二步：關(guān)鍵詞組：1. be located on 坐落于….

2.a five-star standard hotel五星級(jí)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)酒店

3. feel free and at home讓某人感到賓至如歸等。

第三步：連詞成句：1.Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarter’s drive from Nanchong Airport.

2. On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.

3. Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, you’ll feel free and at home.等。

第四步：銜接自然：使用過(guò)渡詞（組）As a result；On the other hand；Most importantly等。

此外還要注意字?jǐn)?shù)，邏輯關(guān)系。