Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你所在的城市出現(xiàn)“共享單車”，請(qǐng)寫一篇倡導(dǎo)低碳出行的演講稿，要點(diǎn)如下：

汽車	帶來污染和擁堵
共享單車	不必?fù)?dān)心存放和丟失
	無污染，緩解擁堵，有利健康等

參考詞匯

low-carbon 低碳的

air pollution空氣污染的

reduce traffic jams 緩解擁堵

注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù) 80-100；

3.開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear classmates,

The bright-colored public bikes—the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates,

The bright-colored public bikes—the Mobikes are now commonly seen on our city streets. With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams, the Mobikes provide a low-carbon way of getting around at minimum cost. Not only do they have zero air pollution, but also they can reduce traffic jams. Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours, you get physical exercise riding Mobikes, which is certain to be good for your health. They also have other advantages. You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them. Therefore, why don’t we start cycling today?

【解析】試題分析：寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文條理清晰，要點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。With the air polluted and the streets often troubled by traffic jams，the Mobikes provide a low﹣carbon way of getting around at minimum cost句中使用with的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)；Not only do they have zero air pollution，but also they can reduce traffic jams．部分倒裝巧妙使用；Instead of sitting in a small space for long hours，you get physical exercise riding Mobikes，which is certain to be good for your health．此處which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；You never have to worry about the Mobikes getting stolen wherever you leave them. Wherever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。