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【題目】假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Hunter likes to go traveling in summer, but he had bad lucky this time. Last week he went to an old temple on a high mountain alone. On the way there it suddenly began to rain heavily, so he ran down the mountain quick. When he got to the foot of the mountain, he found that the wooden bridge was under of the water. He had to spend the rain night in a broken house. He was so cold that he could hardly fall sleep.
The next morning the rain stopped and the bridge was damaged. He thought the river was not deep, so he tried to swim. In the center of the river, the water nearly washed he away. Luckily, he was saved by two man, but he lost his bag. Then they gave him some foods and dry clothes.

Answer 1

【答案】①lucky錯(cuò)誤，改為luck

②quick 錯(cuò)誤，改為quickly

③under后面的of去掉

④rain 錯(cuò)誤，改為rainy

⑤sleep 錯(cuò)誤，改為asleep

⑥and 錯(cuò)誤，改為but

⑦swim后加it

⑧he 錯(cuò)誤，改為him

⑨man錯(cuò)誤，改為men

⑩foods 錯(cuò)誤，改為food

【解析】文章講述了獵人在雨季旅游時(shí)遭遇暴雨，他只好在雨夜露宿野外，淌水過(guò)河的經(jīng)歷。

①此處由形容詞bad修飾，故后面用名詞，指壞運(yùn)氣，故lucky改為luck。

②考查副詞。此處修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)ran down用副詞，指快速跑下山。故quick改為quickly。

③考查介詞短語(yǔ)。under the water"在水下"，under是介詞，不用of，故去掉of。

④考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞night用形容詞，指雨夜，故rain改為rainy。

⑤考查固定短語(yǔ)。fall asleep"入睡，睡著"，是固定短語(yǔ)，故sleep改為asleep。

⑥考查連詞。此處指第二天早上雨停了但橋被毀壞了。前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不用and用but，故and改為but。

⑦考查賓語(yǔ)。此處指他努力要游過(guò)這條河。句中的swim是及物動(dòng)詞，后加賓語(yǔ)。故swim后加it。

⑧考查賓語(yǔ)。用于動(dòng)詞wash后作賓語(yǔ)用賓格形式，指把他沖走。故he改為him。

⑨考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。此處由two修飾，指兩個(gè)人，名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)。故man改為men。

⑩考查名詞。food"食物"，是不可數(shù)名詞，不用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故foods 改為food。