【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Peter,

I'm glad what you are caring about the development of my hometown. Great changes have been taken place since the 19th National Congress of Communist Party of China. The targeted poverty reduction has reached it's ideal aims. Many poor family have got effective help from the local government and have improved their life greatly. Old houses are replaced by new tall buildings which are surrounding with green trees and colourful flowers. The rivers once heavy polluted are getting clearer and clearer. Much to our delighted, lots of fishes return to the rivers. The blue sky paints itself with colors and the birds joyfully dances with the music of gentle winds.

Please come to visiting my hometown in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1.what→ that

2.been去掉

3. Communist Party前加the

4.it's→its

5.family→families

6.surrounding→surrounded

7.heavy→ heavily

8.delighted→delight

9.with→to

10.visiting→visit

【解析】

本文是一封書(shū)信，作者向?qū)Ψ浇榻B了十九大以后家鄉(xiāng)的變化。

第一處：考查賓語(yǔ)從句。句意：我很高興你關(guān)心我家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展。glad后為賓語(yǔ)從句，從句成分完整，用that僅起連接作用，無(wú)實(shí)義，故what改為that。

第二處：考查語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：黨的十九大以來(lái)，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。changes 與take place之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，不用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)（另外，take place是不及物動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)），been是多余的，故去掉been。

第三處：考查定冠詞。句意同上，Communist Party是專有名詞，需要用定冠詞修飾，故Communist Party前加the。

第四處：考查形容詞性物主代詞。句意：精準(zhǔn)扶貧實(shí)現(xiàn)了理想目標(biāo)。根據(jù)句意可知此處表示“它的”而不是“它是”，應(yīng)該用形容詞性物主代詞its修飾名詞ideal aims，故it's改為its。

第五處：考查名詞的數(shù)。句意：許多貧困家庭得到了當(dāng)?shù)卣挠行椭畹玫搅撕艽蟾纳啤?/span>many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故family改為families。

第六處：考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：舊房子被嶄新的樓房所取代，這些樓房被綠樹(shù)和五顏六色的花圍繞（樓房周圍綠樹(shù)成蔭，花團(tuán)錦簇）。be surrounded with表示“被……圍繞”，故surrounding改為surrounded。

第七處：考查副詞。句意：曾經(jīng)污染嚴(yán)重的河流變得越來(lái)越清澈。修飾動(dòng)詞polluted用副詞，故heavy改為 heavily。

第八處：考查名詞。句意：令我們高興的是，許多魚(yú)又回到了河里。作介詞to的賓語(yǔ)用名詞，表示抽象意義，不可數(shù)，故delighted改為delight。

第九處：考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：鳥(niǎo)兒在輕柔的風(fēng)中歡快地跳舞。dance to表示“隨著……起舞”，故with改為to。

第十處：考查不定式。句意：歡迎不久以后你能親自來(lái)我家鄉(xiāng)看一看。前面的to為不定式符號(hào)，此處需要用動(dòng)詞原形，故visiting改為visit。

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