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2．近日教育部（the Ministry of Education）要求加強中小學勞動教育，這一舉措引發(fā)了人們的熱議．請你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，寫一篇新聞報道．

學生的觀點	一部分學生：勞動教育有助于身體健康，全面發(fā)展 另一部分學生：勞動教育占用學習時間，影響成績
你的觀點	…

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Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
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分析 本文要求寫一篇新聞報道，內(nèi)容是學生對于教育部要求中小學加強勞動教育的觀點，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、涵蓋所有內(nèi)容，首先分兩方面陳述學生的觀點，最后闡述自己的觀點．2、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時．3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】所寫內(nèi)容連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，運用了多樣的句式和豐富的詞匯．比如：enabling them to be well developed．現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨的狀語；同位語從句the view that this kind of education will take up their time；非限制性定語從句which will be spent studying otherwise；還有On the other hand 另一方面；as far as I'm concerned，就我而言等短語使語句間連接緊湊．

解答 Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
     As for students，opinions are divided．Some students think that it will be of great benefit for their health，enabling them to be well developed．（高分句型）On the other hand，some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time，which will be spent studying otherwise．（高分句型）And it will have a negative effect on their grades．
     It's true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays，thus lacking the sense of labor．（高分句型）So as far as I'm concerned，students definitely value more what labor brings about．（高分句型）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．