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6．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹我國(guó)即將發(fā)行的首部中小學(xué)校園足球教材．內(nèi)容如下：
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

首部中小學(xué)校園足球教材 出版目的：促進(jìn)我國(guó)校園足球的發(fā)展 出版單位：人民教育出版社 使用對(duì)象：小學(xué)三至六年級(jí)學(xué)生、初中生和高中生 發(fā)行時(shí)間：今年秋季 編寫(xiě)人員：足球?qū)＜�，教練和體育教師 教材內(nèi)容：講授基本技能和規(guī)則，培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和責(zé)任意識(shí) 教材特點(diǎn)：每頁(yè)都使用了二維碼、3D圖象等最新技術(shù)．學(xué)生掃描二維碼，就能用智能手機(jī)觀看教學(xué)視頻．

參考詞匯：人民教育出版社       the People's Education Press
二維碼               the QR codes
首部足球教材         the first series of football textbooks
[寫(xiě)作要求]
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹我國(guó)即將發(fā)行的首都中小學(xué)校園足球教材的情況．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．出版目的；2．出版單位；3．使用對(duì)象；4．發(fā)行時(shí)間；5．編寫(xiě)人員；6．教材內(nèi)容；7．教材特點(diǎn)．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：with the aim of （帶著…的目的），be scheduled to do sth （預(yù)期，計(jì)劃做某事），be designed for （目的是…），apart from （除…還），foster team spirit （培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神），a  sense of responsibility（責(zé)任感），add to （增加），illustrate sth （闡明，舉例），scan sth（掃描某物）．
【高分句型】
1．Written by football experts，coaches and PE teachers，the textbooks are designed for primary school students from grade three to six as well as junior and senior middle school students．
這里是由過(guò)去分詞written作狀語(yǔ)，主句為the textbooks are designed for primary school students from grade three to six as well as junior and senior middle school students，主句的主語(yǔ)為the textbooks與動(dòng)詞write存在邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
2．The latest technologies such as 3D pictures and QR codes have been added to each page of the textbooks to better illustrate the football skills．
這里是動(dòng)詞不定式to better illustrate the football skills作目的狀語(yǔ)，主句為T(mén)he latest technologies such as 3D pictures and QR codes have been added to each page of the textbooks．

解答 With the aim ofpromoting the development of campus football in China，（出版目的） thePeople's Education Press is scheduled to publish the first series of footballtextbooks this autumn．（出版單位、發(fā)行時(shí)間）Written by football experts，coaches and PE teachers，thetextbooks are designed for primary school students from grade three to six aswell as junior and senior middle school students．【高分句型】（編寫(xiě)人員、使用對(duì)象） Apartfrom teaching basic skills and rules，thetextbooks will also foster team spirit and sense of responsibility．（教材內(nèi)容） The latest technologies such as 3D picturesand QR codes have been added to each page of the textbooks to better illustratethe football skills．【高分句型】By scanning the QR codes，students can view educational videos on their smartphones．（教材特點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．