11月的第四個(gè)星期四是感恩節(jié)。2014年的感恩節(jié)是11月27日星期四。假如你是李華，為了感恩母親，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)所提供的信息，給你媽媽發(fā)一封電子郵件。

提示：1、感謝母親多年的養(yǎng)育和教育之恩；

2、美好回憶：惹她生氣時(shí)，她總能理解我；生病時(shí)，她總能

給我最好的照顧；考試成績(jī)不好時(shí)，她總能鼓勵(lì)我；教會(huì)

我要幫助有困難的人及如何做人等；

3、向媽媽談?wù)勀愕睦硐牒痛蛩恪?/p>

注意：1、詞數(shù)150左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已寫好，不記入詞數(shù)；

2、語言通順，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

參考詞匯：感激某人 be grateful to

Dear Mum,

How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here.

 

 

 

 

I hope you are happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Possible version:

Dear Mum,

How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. Thank you for educating me and bringing me up. I’m very grateful to you for taking care of me.

In my heart are many beautiful memories. When I was young, I always made you angry, but you were always very understanding. When I was sick, you were always looking after me. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me. You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble. When I did good deeds, you were always praising me. I am really thankful to you for your teaching me how to be “a real person”.

Now I have grown up. I will work harder and make greater progress in my study. Mum, I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice, so don’t worry about me.

I hope you are happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類書面表達(dá)，主要為了感恩父母。以第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。要點(diǎn)為：1、感謝母親多年的養(yǎng)育和教育之恩；2、美好回憶：惹她生氣時(shí)，她總能理解我；生病時(shí)，她總能；給我最好的照顧；考試成績(jī)不好時(shí)，她總能鼓勵(lì)我；教會(huì)我要幫助有困難的人及如何做人等；3、向媽媽談?wù)勀愕睦硐牒痛蛩悖ǜ优W(xué)習(xí)，成人成才）。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文里較多運(yùn)用了高級(jí)詞匯，如bring up, be grateful to等；另外本文中高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用也很到位，如時(shí)間狀語從句When I failed an exam, you encouraged me.定語從句You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類書面表達(dá)

 

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