Question

【題目】目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

主要原因	考試偏多、偏難
	不用功、懶惰
	取悅父母、老師
個人看法	作弊不對，違反校規(guī)
	要誠實，努力學(xué)習(xí)
	……（其他看法）

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右。

4．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.）

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools, we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇關(guān)于少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊的看法。文章給出了提綱，要介紹作弊的原因和個人看法。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：含有定語從句的句子sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.；it作形式主語：it is wrong to cheat in examinations 。2.使用了過渡詞語：On the other hand, What’s more等。3.使用了重要短語：take examinations參加考試；in my opinion在我看來；work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)instead of而不是；get prepared for做準(zhǔn)備。