Question

6．假設(shè)你是李華，明年將要參加高考，對(duì)于專業(yè)選擇與父母的意見(jiàn)各不相同，對(duì)此很困惑．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)一下提示，用英語(yǔ)給你的英國(guó)筆友David發(fā)一封郵件，談?wù)勱P(guān)于你的專業(yè)選擇問(wèn)題．
1父母的想法；     2 你的意愿；    3 向David尋求建議．
要求：
1 詞數(shù)100左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2 信的格式和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear David，
I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
                                                          
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息明年將要參加高考，對(duì)于專業(yè)選擇與父母的意見(jiàn)各不相同，對(duì)此很困惑．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)一下提示，用英語(yǔ)給你的英國(guó)筆友David發(fā)一封郵件，談?wù)勱P(guān)于你的專業(yè)選擇問(wèn)題，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：父母的想法；你的意愿；向David尋求建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：at a loss茫然，不知所措；prepare  for為…做好準(zhǔn)備；However然而；in great need of急需；Despite不管，不顧；be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；make full use of充分利用；
My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）
However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）
I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
      I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
      My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）（父母的想法）Despite their opinions，I want to learn a foreign language because languages are what I am interested in and good at．I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）（自己的意愿）
     What should I do？I am looking forward to your advice．（向David尋求建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．