Question

微博（micro blog）已成為時(shí)下學(xué)生常用的交流方式。人們對(duì)此褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述人們對(duì)學(xué)生使用微博的符法。
學(xué)生：記錄生活，交流思想。
家長(zhǎng)：了解孩子想法.過渡關(guān)注博客.影響學(xué)習(xí)。
教育人士：開闊視野，但需要適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右。
參考詞匯：開闊視野broaden one’s horizon 引導(dǎo)guide

Answer 1

Nowadays, micro blog has become a common way that students communicate online. Students think the micro blog is a very good platform/place to keep a record of their daily lives, express their emotions, exchange/share ideas and above all promote their communicating skills.
On the other hand, parents’ opinions are divided on this. Some think that they can be kept informed of what their children have been thinking through micro blogs. However, others are afraid that focusing on blogs too much will affect children’s studies.
Educators argue that the micro blog broadens students’ horizons, but meanwhile appropriate guidance is necessary.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。微博（micro blog）已成為時(shí)下學(xué)生常用的交流方式。人們對(duì)此褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述人們對(duì)學(xué)生使用微博的符法。
學(xué)生：記錄生活，交流思想。家長(zhǎng)：了解孩子想法.過渡關(guān)注博客.影響學(xué)習(xí)。教育人士：開闊視野，但需要適當(dāng)引導(dǎo)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Students think the micro blog is a very good platform/place to keep a record of their daily lives, express their emotions, exchange/share ideas and above all promote their communicating skills.這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。Educators argue that the micro blog broadens students’ horizons, but meanwhile appropriate guidance is necessary. 這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。