請你根據(jù)以下提示，結合生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Never be afraid of making mistakes. Actually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal where success lies.

注意：1．無須寫標題，不得找抄英語提示語； 2．除詩歌外，文體不限；

3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱； 4．詞數(shù)120左右

 

 

 

 

one possible version:

Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.

I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided them. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I build up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black.

Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，英文提示的意思是：進步就是在不斷的犯錯中取得的，所以不應該害怕犯錯。通過具體的事例來說明對所給句子的理解。短文應該用一般過去時。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：make a difference of ，what、Whenever引導的從句，和Practice makes perfect. With time going by等都很不錯。

考點：提綱作文。

 

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