Question

校學(xué)生會(huì)正在面向全校師生征集創(chuàng)建綠色校園活動(dòng)的建議。下面是一些已經(jīng)征集到的建議，請(qǐng)你為校報(bào)寫一篇英文報(bào)道。

Creating a Green Campus

1.綠化環(huán)境，多植樹種草，愉悅身心；

2.保護(hù)環(huán)境，盡可能少使用塑料制品等，減少白色污染；

3.考試不作弊，不抄襲作業(yè)，不瀏覽不健康網(wǎng)站。

你的建議……

要求：

1．不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)拓展，以使行文連貫、流暢；

2．開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

83．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

We meet a lot of difficulities in our daily life.when problems arise ,do you give up or take a positive attitude towards them? Talk about your opinions.

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題； ②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例；

④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

⑤詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

(提示:請(qǐng)將寫作答案寫在答題卡上的相應(yīng)位置，寫在此處無效。）

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Recently the students' union of our school has been collecting suggestions entitled Creating a Green Campus among all the teachers and students. The followings are some of the good ones from them. Firstly more trees, flowers and grass should be planted in the campus, which can not only make the school look more beautiful but also let the teachers and students feel happier. Secondly we should use plastic bags and bottles as few as possible to reduce the white pollution. Thirdly we ought not to cheat in exams, copy homework from others or surf some unhealthy websites, which is also considered as an important part of creating a green campus.

I suggest that we should form good habits of turning off the lights as we leave school and not wasting water. If everyone can make contributions to these above, I believe we can create a really green campus.

【解析】

本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些比較好的短語as few as possible to do 盡可能做某事；form the habit of 養(yǎng)成。。習(xí)慣；turn off關(guān)；make contributions to 致力于；more trees, flowers and grass should be planted in the campus, which can not only make the school look more beautiful but also let the teachers and students feel happier.在這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，not only but also連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語動(dòng)詞；Thirdly we ought not to cheat in exams, copy homework from others or surf some unhealthy websites, which is also considered as an important part of creating a green campus這個(gè)句子中不僅僅提到非限制性定語從句，還考查到consider的被動(dòng)語態(tài)；

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文