Question

下面段文中共有10處語言錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。[來源:學(xué)#科#網(wǎng)Z#X#X#K]

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。

On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great diversity of robots. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just as real people do, included playing chess, playing the piano and draw pictures. Besides, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which makes us delighted. However, that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced even if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots, especially about their functions. The great human wisdom is so powerfully that it makes us feel more comfortable live in the world.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which（where）we saw a great diversity of robots. It was amazed (amazing) to find those robots could do a great number of things just as real people, included (including) playing chess, playing the piano and draw (drawing) pictures. Besides, the robots were in different kinds and shapes, which makes (made) us delighted. However, that (what) excited me most was the show given by a group of robots. They danced even (as)if they were dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of (去掉of) about robots, especially about their functions. The great human wisdom is so powerfully (powerful) that it makes us feel more comfortable live (to live 或living) in the world.

【解析】略