Question

8．下文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每行中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪 除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
A performance in our dty is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．
In front of a supermarket，five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in two food markets and all others were collected by 700students from a secondary school On that day，after leaving the food markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了關(guān)于拒絕使用塑料袋的一場(chǎng)公益性演出，志愿者們身穿白色塑料袋穿行在人群中，呼吁人們盡量用布袋代替塑料袋，志愿者穿的塑料袋是從附近食品商場(chǎng)和一所中學(xué)收集來(lái)的．從商場(chǎng)出來(lái)的顧客還被要求交出多余的塑料袋，短短兩個(gè)小時(shí)
就收集了幾百個(gè)塑料袋．

解答 A performance in our dty is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags．In front of a supermarket，
                                                              去掉to
five volunteers wore white plastic bags and walk around and through the crowd．The performance called on people to use
                                                               walked
less cloth bags instead of plastic ones．Some of the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected from customer in
去掉less                                                                                  worn                                                        customers
two food markets and all∧others were collected by 700students from a secondary school On that day，after leaving the food
                                    the                                                                                                              when
markets，customers were asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn't need Several hundreds plastic bags were
                                                                                                         they                               hundred
collected for just two hours．
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1．去掉to；考查不定式，這里make作為使役動(dòng)詞后面要跟省to不定式，故把to去掉．
2．walk改為walked；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，這里walked和wore作并列謂語(yǔ)．
3．去掉less；考查句意，句意為"演出呼吁人們使用布袋來(lái)代替塑料袋"，不含比較的意思，所以去掉less．
4．wore改為worn；考查分詞用法，這里bags和動(dòng)詞worn是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用過(guò)去分詞．
5．customer改為customers；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)句意，在商場(chǎng)的顧客應(yīng)當(dāng)很多，所以用復(fù)數(shù)．
6．a(chǎn)ll后面加the；考查冠詞，這里用定冠詞表示特指．
7．a(chǎn)fter改為when；考查句意，結(jié)合上下文語(yǔ)境，應(yīng)該是"顧客在離開(kāi)市場(chǎng)時(shí)…"所以用when．
8．we改為they；考查人稱代詞，結(jié)合句意，這里用they指代前面的customers．
9．hundreds改為hundred；考查名詞，hundred，thousand等類似的單詞前面有具體數(shù)詞時(shí)，不能用復(fù)數(shù)．
10．for改為in；考查介詞，intwo hours意為"在兩個(gè)小時(shí)之內(nèi)"，for+時(shí)間段 常用于完成時(shí)態(tài)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1．首先整體閱讀短文，把握文章的中心思想；2．分析句式結(jié)構(gòu)，弄清句群關(guān)系；3．運(yùn)用單詞，短語(yǔ)，句型等基本語(yǔ)言知識(shí)找出文中的錯(cuò)誤，加以修改．