Question

9．下列圖表反映的是某校2007年與2010年學生健康狀況調(diào)查的部分數(shù)據(jù)．請你用英文為某報寫一份報告，反映該校三年間學生健康狀況的變化情況，分析其原因并提出相應的改進措施（不少于兩條）．

注意：
1．報告必須包括圖表中所有內(nèi)容．
2．詞數(shù)：100左右．第一句已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005，while that of overweight，from 36% to 52.4%．
本句中為while引導的兩個并列句，表示對比，其中包含短語from…to…，The number of+復數(shù)名詞，表示…的數(shù)量，后面的謂語動詞用單數(shù)形式；以及后面代詞that的準確使用（指代前面的The number of）．
高分句型二：
Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from being nearsighted．
本句為only+介詞短語（狀語）+部分倒裝的句式用法，prevent…from…阻止某人做某事．
高分句型三：
Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight．
本句為so that引導的一個結(jié)果狀語從句，前面為被動語態(tài)的使用，pay attention to…注意…；put on weight發(fā)福，體重增加．

解答 A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years．The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005，while that of overweight，from 36% to 52.4%．（高分句型一） Nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do．Besides，over 15% more students become mentally unhealthy．
To improve students'health，we call for less homework．Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from being nearsighted．（高分句型二）Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight．（高分句型三）
         With their heavy burdens removed，students can then keep in normal mental health．

點評 數(shù)據(jù)分析類的作文，需要考生認真觀察數(shù)據(jù)，透過現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì)，從數(shù)據(jù)中分析原因，得出結(jié)論．數(shù)據(jù)分析類的作文，需要考生認真觀察數(shù)據(jù)，透過現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì)，從數(shù)據(jù)中分析原因，得出結(jié)論．