Question

以A Ten-Minute Break 為題，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文。短文的內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、課間十分鐘的休息是必要的；2、要注意休息的方式，別讓自己過(guò)于興奮；

3、自己通常是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

                            A Ten-Minute Break 

As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.

     During the ten-minute break we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.  

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk during the break. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇簡(jiǎn)短的論說(shuō)文，內(nèi)容提示較詳細(xì)，學(xué)生容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)作分為三部分內(nèi)容，尤其要具體寫(xiě)出自己的課間十分鐘是怎么度過(guò)的。另外，要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。用第一人稱有單數(shù)也要用復(fù)數(shù)。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如definitely important ，feel both physically and mentally tired ，get rid of，instead of等， 還運(yùn)用了名詞性從句What we need is to have a real rest，定語(yǔ)從句So don’t do anything that will make you too excited.及狀語(yǔ)從句When the new class begins, I feel fresh again.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：therefore，otherwise等。

考點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)短的論說(shuō)文