Question

假如你叫李華，你的一位外國(guó)朋友Tom想在你市尋找一套合適的房子居住。幾日前，你在四季花園(Seasonal Garden)小區(qū)內(nèi)看到一處。下面是小區(qū)位置及周邊情況簡(jiǎn)圖。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹一個(gè)情況。
要求包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1. 小區(qū)的地理位置
2. 小區(qū)的地理優(yōu)勢(shì)
（1）學(xué)校、幼兒園、醫(yī)院、超市、銀行等生活配套設(shè)施一應(yīng)俱全；
（2）附近有二十余條公交線路，交通便利；
（3）建筑風(fēng)格獨(dú)特，戶(hù)型新穎，小區(qū)擁有游泳池、健身房等休閑設(shè)施。
要求詞數(shù)100左右。（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）

Dear Tom,
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city. Recently I happened to find one that might be suitable for you.
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Are you satisfied with it? If so ,I will arrange it for you.
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city. Recently I happened to find one that might be suitable for you.
The apartment building is located in Seasonal Garden with a park to the north. It is to the northwest of Huanan Sauare and is near to the main road Zhonghua Road. More than 20 bus lines are near at hand. So it is very convenient for you to go to the other parts of the city. Besides, a hospital, a supermarket, a high school, banks and even a material market are within easy reach. The buildings in this area are of specific style and newly designed. In the community there is a swimming pool and a gym, where you and your family can enjoy yourselves in your spare time.
Are you satisfied with it? If so, I will arrange it for you.
Yours,
Li Hua

這是一篇介紹小區(qū)情況的書(shū)信，切入點(diǎn)容易找到，作文要點(diǎn)清晰。同時(shí)由于內(nèi)容貼近生活，具有鮮明的生活性，要求學(xué)生詳細(xì)介紹小區(qū)的地理位置和優(yōu)勢(shì)，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意在描述時(shí)選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多運(yùn)用高級(jí)的詞匯和句型和適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞。