Question

書面表達(dá)（30分）
目前醫(yī)療費不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強烈呼吁政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立有效的醫(yī)療保障體制。請根據(jù)下面圖畫，以“Health Care”為題寫一篇短文，簡要說明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，重點闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的觀點。

注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括圖中所提供的主要信息，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文內(nèi)容連貫、完整；2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。hospital discharge (出院)
From the picture, we can see that_________________________________________
                                                                   

Answer 1

                        Health Care
From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldn’t stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford． It’s really another heart attack for him.
At present, many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. Worse still, some have to wait for the last day of their life.
We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced． The government should build up a favorable medical system. Everyone could enjoy their life as long as possible.

解析看圖寫作應(yīng)分兩個部分，第一段的描寫圖畫內(nèi)容，第二段是重點闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的觀點。在第一段中要準(zhǔn)確的描寫圖畫，得了心臟病的老人看到高額的費用嚇得暈倒，再分析原因現(xiàn)象：目前醫(yī)療費不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強烈呼吁政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立有效的醫(yī)療保障體制。第二段要給出建議的解決辦法和理由，寫作時要適當(dāng)運用復(fù)雜句：如：It was beyond what he could afford． It’s really another heart attack for him.這是what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。另外還要注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞，象Worse still,等詞的運用。