Question

【題目】書面表達請閱讀下列文字和圖表，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

When was the last time you had fun with your parents? Your parents are all busy during working days; during the weekends, you may want to hang out with them but they may have to work extra hours.

This is not uncommon. In China, both of the parents have their jobs. Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. A recent survey done in the US found that more than half of American parents spend less than three hours having fun with their children each week.

As the Daily Mail noted: Families are spending little quality time creating bonds and precious memories together during the week because of the demands of modern life.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 簡要分析父母陪伴孩子的時間越來越少的原因；

3. 結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)劯改付嗯惆楹⒆訉ζ浜⒆拥挠绊憽?/span>

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。(陪伴: accompany v.)

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children, which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons.

There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon. First, in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before, so they have to spend most of their time making money. In addition, parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company.

Take my own experience for example. Once upon a time, I got into trouble in my studies. It was my parents’ company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence. Plain and peaceful as it was, this experience left an unforgettable impression on me, which is of great significance to my growth.

To conclude,it’s vital for parents to spend more time with their children. However busy parents are, they should afford their time to accompany their children.(158)

【解析】試題分析：請閱讀下列文字和圖表，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2. 簡要分析父母陪伴孩子的時間越來越少的原因；3. 結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)劯改付嗯惆楹⒆訉ζ浜⒆拥挠绊��！緦懽饕�求�?/span>1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。(陪伴: accompany v.)寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】Nowadays, it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children, which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons.考查非限制性定語從句；First, in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before, so they have to spend most of their time making money.句中運用并列句和非謂語動詞。parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company.被動語態(tài)和省略句出現(xiàn)在句中；an unforgettable impression on me, which is of great significance to my growth.非限制性定語從句運用得體；However busy parents are, they should afford their time to accompany their children. However引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句跟是錦上添花；另外，In addition, Take my own experience for example. Once upon a time, To conclude,為文章增色添彩。