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6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫得以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（　�。�，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（　�。﹦澋簦�修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分．
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another，look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests．While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms，she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did，we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore，she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．

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分析 上個(gè)周六的下午，天很熱，Li Yue 去了市區(qū)買歌唱比賽的服裝，我們卻在涼爽舒適的房間里享受休閑時(shí)光，她花費(fèi)了一下午的時(shí)間終于找到了合適的服裝．被Li Yue的行為所感動(dòng)，我們演唱比賽取得第一名的好成績(jī)．Li Yue一直很關(guān)心班級(jí)，她經(jīng)常在業(yè)余時(shí)間幫助他人，她為我們樹立了一個(gè)好的榜樣，我們應(yīng)該向她學(xué)習(xí)．

解答 On the hot afternoon of last Saturday，Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to
                                                                                                 walked
another，look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests．While the rest of us
            looking                                                                contest
were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms，she spent the whole afternoon 
                                                             comfortable
searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she
                                                                                                         moved
did，we tried our bestbutwon the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the
                                and                                                         去掉is
class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set∧good example to us．
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Therefore，she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．
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1．walk改為walked；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，事情發(fā)生在last Saturday，所以要用一般過去時(shí)．
2．look改為looking；考查分詞作狀語(yǔ)，句子的主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞look是主謂關(guān)系，所以要用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)．
3．contests改為contest；考查名詞，結(jié)合語(yǔ)境分析，這里應(yīng)該是指一場(chǎng)比賽，所以要用單數(shù)形式．
4．comfortably改為comfortable；考查形容詞，這里用形容詞作定語(yǔ)，修飾名詞rooms．
5．moving改為moved；考查分詞作狀語(yǔ)，句子主語(yǔ)we與動(dòng)詞move是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以要用過去分詞作狀語(yǔ)．
6．but改為and；考查連詞，分析句意應(yīng)為"我們努力取得了第一名的好成績(jī)"，所以這里不表轉(zhuǎn)折，應(yīng)該是并列關(guān)系，故用and．
7．去掉is；考查句式結(jié)構(gòu)，這是一個(gè)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子謂語(yǔ)部分為cares about，is在這里多余，所以去掉．
8．in改為to；考查介詞，devote time to（doing）sth是固定搭配，這里to是介詞，意為"致力于做某事"．
9．good前面加a；考查冠詞，example作為"榜樣，例子"講是可數(shù)名詞，所以前面加a 泛指"一個(gè)"，set a good example to sb 意為"為某人樹立一個(gè)好的榜樣"．

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