Question

6．請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文．詞數(shù)不少于50．

In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖寫作描述了一個在海洋上的瓶子里劃船的小男孩，讓人聯(lián)想到家長給孩子過多的保護．因此考生應(yīng)從深層次的含義入手，可以使用舉例，或者邏輯分析的方法來豐富作文的內(nèi)容．注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時，以及恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞．
重要短語：
 do harm to，對…有害，a good case in point，一個恰當(dāng)?shù)睦�子，in summary，總之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的．

解答 There's such an interesting cartoon，a boy rowing in a little bottle while the bottle fiowing on the sea．And it makes me think about today's parents and their children．（描述畫面）
     Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（引出現(xiàn)象）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is also a good way to let their children study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends and student，their study and busy life and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．（提出建議）
     In summary，spoiling children is no right．Parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（總結(jié)主題）

點評 在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體．