Question

5．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英文短文．
Every morning，on his way to work，Mike passed an old man who was always at the same place with a cup in his hand hoping to get a bit of change from those who passed by．For most people，this person was someone to be ignored as if he didn't exist，someone who they didn't want to be bothered with．However，Mike would always say good morning to him and wish him a nice day and sometimes would drop a dollar or two in his cup．This behavior went on for several years until one day before retirement．
He told the man that he would no longer pass by because it was his last day on the job．The man took his hand and shook it warmly saying that he had always looked forward to seeing Mike not because he dropped a few dollars in his cup．He said he would miss him because he was one of the few people who said hello and bid him good day．The man also said that his warm words always brightened his day and helped him to continue．
We all have power of words and we often do not recognize that some can be devastating（毀滅性的） while some can be encouraging．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就言語的力量的話題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：
（1）你對(duì)上文中Mike的做法持什么看法；
（2）談?wù)勅粘Ｉ�活中言語的力量；
（3）以你或他人的經(jīng)歷舉例論證言語的力量．
【寫作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本題特點(diǎn)是"讀寫結(jié)合"，考查考生閱讀理解、要點(diǎn)概括、用英語敘事說理等多方面能力．解答此類試題，除了要注意一般寫作規(guī)范之外，還要準(zhǔn)確理解所給文章的中心思想并準(zhǔn)確予以解讀和概括．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：Every day Mike said hello and sometimes gave one dollar or two to an old man who was begging for a bit of change． 每天邁克都打招呼，有時(shí)給一兩美元給一個(gè)乞討的老人．這是一個(gè)定語從句，who was begging for a bit of change是定語從句修飾名詞man．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：．So depressed did I feel that I did not feel like talking to anyone at all．我感到很沮喪，我根本不想和任何人說話．這是一個(gè)倒裝句，so depressed 提前句子要做部分倒裝．

解答 Every day Mike said hello and sometimes gave one dollar or two to an old man who was begging for a bit of change．His words encouraged the old man to continue his hard life．【簡單描述】
   I couldn't agree more with what Mike did for the old man every day．Words have such great power that they can influence people greatly，either devastating or encouraging．Words have magic power over people．A few worm words may brighten a day while just a hurtful sentence may leave a deep scar in a fragile heart．In our daily life，we should pay attention to what we say since it is like a double-edged sword．【個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)】
     I also experienced the power of words．It was a time when I failed in the first exam at senior high school．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）So depressed did I feel that I did not feel like talking to anyone at all．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）Yet after class my teacher Mr．Wang invited me to his office and said smilingly to me，"I hope you will not be defeated by temporary failure．Pick up your courage and prove that you are the best next time，will you？"All of a sudden，my world was brightened by his inspiring words．It seemed as if a stream of warmth flowed into my heart and instantly I was filled with energy and ambition to fight again．【例證語言的力量】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合起來，要求考生在讀懂文章信息的基礎(chǔ)上，按照要求有條理地寫出所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，提高文章的檔次．