Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學學生李華。你和同學在寒假期間去醫(yī)院參加了志愿者活動，請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�英語角寫一篇英文稿件，介紹此次經(jīng)歷。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：自助掛號機 self-service registration machine

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Answer 1

【答案】Last winter vacation, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital.

On our first morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, informing us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily routines in a hospital.

The next morning, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our job. Together with my classmates, I assisted some patients when they didn’t know how to use the self-service registration machine. For senior citizens, we helped them register to save them the trouble.

Besides, I showed people the way to different consulting rooms. For those elderly patients, we accompanied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help.

Later I shared my picture in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some even expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. Actually, I had the most amazing experience doing very simple things for others.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇記敘文；假設你是紅星中學學生李華。你和同學在寒假期間去醫(yī)院參加了志愿者活動，請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�英語角寫一篇英文稿件，介紹此次經(jīng)歷。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：the daily routines（日常工作），the self-service registration machine（自助掛號機），save them the trouble（避免了麻煩），consulting rooms（咨詢室）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。