【題目】 短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔\〕劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi .And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I can try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor.

I believe hard work is that it takes to accomplish my goal.

【答案】

【1】inspired改為inspiring

【2】刪除was或在was前面加which/that

【3】his改為their

【4】had改為have

【5】life改為lives

【6】without改為with

【7】can改為must

【8】can后加to

【9】adequate改為adequately

【10】that改為what

【解析】

試題分析：本文記敘了我們班級進(jìn)行的“我的中國夢”的討論，我的夢想是進(jìn)入醫(yī)科大學(xué)，未來治病救人。

【1】inspired改為inspiring 考查形容詞。現(xiàn)在分詞轉(zhuǎn)換而來的形容詞“inspiring鼓舞人心的”通常修飾事物。所以本句中該詞做定語修飾名詞短語Chinese Dream。

【2】刪除was或在was前面加which/that 考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。刪除was后，過去分詞短語put forward by President Xi作為定語修飾Chinese Dream；在was后加that/which，就變成定語從句that/which was put forward by President Xi修飾先行詞“Chinese Dream”。

【3】his改為their 考查代詞。本句主語“others其他人”是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，所以本句中使用their指代others。

【4】had改為have 考查時態(tài)。原句中過去完成時表示過去某個動作之前就已經(jīng)完成的動作，而本句并沒有說明是在過去的過去發(fā)生的事情，使用現(xiàn)在完成時“have wanted....”表示我一直都想.....。

【5】life改為lives 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。本句中名詞“l(fā)ife生命”是可數(shù)名詞，前面的名詞people是復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以也應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式“l(fā)ives”。

【6】without改為with 考查介詞。句意：醫(yī)生可以使用他們的專業(yè)知識幫助人們過更好的生活。根據(jù)句意可知使用肯定句。所以原句否定意義的介詞without要改為with。

【7】can改為must 考查上下文串聯(lián)。本句中must與后句中must形成對應(yīng)；句意：為了實現(xiàn)我的夢想，從現(xiàn)在開始我必須努力學(xué)習(xí)。

【8】can后加to 考查不定式。本句中不定式to get into a good medical college做目的狀語。句意：為了進(jìn)入一所好的醫(yī)科大學(xué)，我必須學(xué)習(xí)我能夠?qū)W到的盡可能多的知識。

【9】adequate改為adequately 考查副詞。副詞在句中通常做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞或動詞，形容詞通常做定語修飾名詞或代詞。本句中副詞adequately做狀語修飾謂語動詞prepare myself for the job of a doctor。

【10】that改為what 考查表語從句。本句中what引導(dǎo)表語從句，并在句中作為動詞take的賓語。

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