Question

【題目】最近，教育部出臺新規(guī)，允許在校大學(xué)生休學(xué)一年進行創(chuàng)業(yè)，引發(fā)了廣泛熱議。為此，你們學(xué)校將以此為話題組織英文演講比賽。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，字數(shù)150左右，參與比賽。你的演講要包括以下幾個方面：

1、你對此新規(guī)的看法；

2、進入大學(xué)的你是否會休學(xué)創(chuàng)業(yè)；

3、闡述上述兩點時必須各提供至少2條理由或論據(jù)加以支撐。

【寫作要求】

1．內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! I would like to begin my speech with my view on the policy itself.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! I would like to begin my speech with my view on the policy itself.

Personally, I applaud for this policy. As we all know, many college graduates can’t find a job upon their graduation. Starting a business, particularly before graduating, is a good way to ease the tension. Moreover, college students are the most energetic group, so encouraging them to be engaged in business early will benefit our nation with more innovation.

Nevertheless, beneficial as the policy is, not all the students prefer to doing business, me included. Money is the first problem to a poor student. It’s impossible to run a business without fund. Secondly, lack of social experience will surely make my business end in failure if started. Most importantly, I am not keen on business at all. A stable job and easy life is my biggest ambition.

To sum up, I wholeheartedly approve of the new regulation but won’t choose to establish my own business at college.

【解析】

試題分析：最近，教育部出臺新規(guī)，允許在校大學(xué)生休學(xué)一年進行創(chuàng)業(yè)，引發(fā)了廣泛熱議。為此，你們學(xué)校將以此為話題組織英文演講比賽。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，字數(shù)150左右，參與比賽。你的演講要包括以下幾個方面：1、你對此新規(guī)的看法；2、進入大學(xué)的你是否會休學(xué)創(chuàng)業(yè)；3、闡述上述兩點時必須各提供至少2條理由或論據(jù)加以支撐。【寫作要求】1．內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】As we all know, many college graduates can’t find a job upon their graduation.句中運用了非限制性定語從句；Starting a business, particularly before graduating, is a good way to ease the tension.動名詞短語作主語；Moreover, college students are the most energetic group, so encouraging them to be engaged in business early will benefit our nation with more innovation.并列句和動名詞短語作主語的完美結(jié)合；Nevertheless, beneficial as the policy is, not all the students prefer to doing business, me included.部分否定出現(xiàn)在句中；Most importantly, I am not keen on business at all. A stable job and easy life is my biggest ambition.句中運用了最高級；To sum up, I wholeheartedly approve of the new regulation but won’t choose to establish my own business at college.動詞不定式的獨立成分和表示轉(zhuǎn)折的并列句巧妙結(jié)合。