Question

假如你叫李華，最近你校在為一批來自英國的假期學(xué)生征尋住宿家庭，你有意申請。

請用英語寫封自薦信，說明你申請的理由：

1．住房寬敞，環(huán)境好，交通便，亦有私家車；

2．父母和我都擅長英語，樂于交流； 

3．曾經(jīng)接待過來自美國的朋友。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

3．開頭已寫好，不入計總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir,    I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students. Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs. zxxk

Apart from the convenient public transportation, our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality, my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them. Above all, we have hosted some American friends, through which we’ve gained lots of experience. In addition, my mother is expert in cooking, and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.

I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hu

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。