【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear fellow students,

With the popularity of cell-phones and the Internet, some of us students spend too much time play with cell-phones or computer games, which are bad for our studies. Worse still, we had little time communicate with our parents and friends. So do we have time for physical exercise.

What shall we do it to improve the situation? All of us shouldn't realize the negative effects of modern media. Let's limit your time of playing with cell-phones or computer games. Instead we should spend less time playing sports or talking with our parents and friends, who helps us relax and communicate.

That's all. Thank you!

【答案】

【1】play--playing

【2】are--is

【3】had--have

【4】communicate前面加to

【5】so—Neither/Nor

【6】 it去掉

【7】shouldn’t--should

【8】your--our

【9】less--more

【10】who---which

【解析】

【1】play—playing 考查動詞短語。Spend time in doing 花費(fèi)時間做某事；

【2】are--is 考查主謂一致 。which 代指玩手機(jī)這件事，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數(shù).

【3】had—have 考查動詞的時態(tài)。整個文章用一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述。

【4】communicate前面加to 考查動詞短語。Have little time to do sth 沒有時間做某事；

【5】so—Neither/Nor 考查不定詞。根據(jù)上文提到we had little time communicate with our parents and friends沒有時間與父母和朋友交流，故下文提到?jīng)]有時間進(jìn)行體育鍛煉。

【6】 it去掉 考查特殊疑問句。句意：我們應(yīng)該做什么來改善這種狀況呢？

【7】shouldn’t--should 考查句意理解。句意：我們應(yīng)該意識到現(xiàn)在媒體的負(fù)面影響；

【8】your--our 考查代詞。句意：讓我們限制一下玩手機(jī)和電腦的時間。

【9】less--more 考查形容詞的比較級。句意：反而我們應(yīng)該花更多的時間在運(yùn)動上或與父母交流上，這能幫我們更好的放松。

【10】who---which 考查定語從句。Which代指花費(fèi)更多的時間在鍛煉或與父母交流上，故用which.

考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯。

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