Question

14．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
Education does Count（excerpt）-Bill Gates
Hundreds of students send me e-mail each year asking for advice about education．They want to know what to study，or whether it's OK to drop out of college since that's what I did．
My basic advice is simple and heartfelt．"Get the best education you can．Take advantage of high school and college．Learn how to learn．"
It's true that I dropped out of college to start Microsoft，but I was at Harvard for three years before dropping out-and I'd love to have the time to go back．As I've said before，nobody should drop out of college unless they believe they face the opportunity of a lifetime．And even then they should reconsider．
In my company's early years，we had a bright part-time programmer who threatened to drop out of high school to work full-time．We told him no．
Quite a few of out people didn't finish college，but we discourage dropping out．
Having a diploma certainly helps somebody who is looking to us for a job．
There's not a perfect correlation between attitudes in high school and success in later life，of course．But it's a real mistake not to take the opportunity to learn a huge range of subjects，to learn to work with people in high school，and to get the grades that will help you get into a good college．
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)教育的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
   （1）為什么有些學(xué)生想中途放棄學(xué)業(yè)去創(chuàng)業(yè)；
（2）你認(rèn)為讀書(shū)與事業(yè)之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的；
（3）你自己有何打算．
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
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概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作，這類(lèi)作文可按照三段式模板寫(xiě)：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語(yǔ)：due to（由于），be sure to do sth （肯定會(huì)做某事），be beneficial to…（對(duì)…有益），drop out of school（輟學(xué)），have nothing to do with （與…無(wú)關(guān)），lighten the heavy financial burden （減輕經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)），accumulate experience（積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)），at an early age（在很小的年紀(jì)），as for（至于，關(guān)于），make full use of （充分利用），complete schooling（完成學(xué)業(yè)），achieve one's dream（實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想）．
【高分句型一】
1．Some students want to drop out of school，①believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career，②because there are many cases ③where people ④who don't finish their schooling are successful，such as Bill Gates．
①此處是由"現(xiàn)在分詞+從句"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"Some students want to drop out of school"．
②此處是由"because"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
③此處是由關(guān)系副詞"where"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"case"．
     ④此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"people"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
1．Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on their parents．
此處是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"Dropping out to find a job"作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
【高分句型三】
2．Schools are where people become knowledgeable．
此處是由連接詞副詞"where"引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型四】
4．Schools are where people become knowledgeable．此處是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，具體結(jié)構(gòu)為"Only+【狀語(yǔ)成分：介詞短語(yǔ)/when、if引導(dǎo)的從句/時(shí)間副詞】+一般疑問(wèn)句形式"．

解答 The author is often asked to give advice about education due to his successful experience．He thinks it is unwise to drop out and that learning is sure to be beneficial．（概括）
Some students want to drop out of school，believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career，because there are many cases where people who don't finish their schooling are successful，such as Bill Gates．【高分句型一】Besides，the high tuition of college education is too much for ordinary families．Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on their parents．【高分句型二】Furthermore，experience counts most for a career and no wonder why some would like to accumulate experience by taking a job at an early age．（有些學(xué)生想中途放棄學(xué)業(yè)去創(chuàng)業(yè)的原因）
Knowledge is power．Schools are where people become knowledgeable．【高分句型三】（讀書(shū)與事業(yè)之間的關(guān)系）
As for me，I will make full use of time to complete my schooling and achieve my dream．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：打算）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作是將閱讀與寫(xiě)作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．