Question

【題目】作為一名高三學(xué)生，請你就目前普遍存在的中學(xué)生暑期游覽名牌大學(xué)的現(xiàn)象用英語給校報“英語角”寫一篇短文。

1．名校游的積極作用（至少兩點）；

2．名校游的負面作用（至少兩點）；

3．你的看法。

注意：

1．短文須包括所有要點，可適度發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。

2．詞數(shù)120左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

3．不得提及本人姓名和所在學(xué)校。

Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students．

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Answer 1

【答案】A possible version:Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students. In recent years，many high schools have been organizing visits to famous universities during summer holidays.Obviously，it is beneficial for us high school students. Firstly，by visiting those famous universities we can get to know more about them and can experience the academic atmosphere there. Secondly，these visits can inspire us to set higher goals and arouse our enthusiasm to work hard at our lessons.However，the visits can have negative impacts on parts of the universities. Too many visitors on the campus can disturb the normal school life there，which is a great pressure for the universities concerned. Furthermore，it may cause safety problems as well.In my opinion，visiting universities during the holidays is a good idea，but we must make sure it does not become a burden for the universities.

【解析】這是一篇夾敘夾議的表達自己觀點的議論文。首先描述題目要求的現(xiàn)象，其次講訴這種現(xiàn)象帶來的影響作用——積極的、消極的，最后闡述一下自己的觀點和立場；注意在闡述自己的立場和觀點時要明確，不能模棱兩可，讓人摸不到頭腦。試題分析：首先用簡單的語言闡述現(xiàn)象：Visiting famous universities during summer holidays is gaining popularity among high school students. In recent years，many high schools have been organizing visits to famous universities during summer holidays. 其中使用現(xiàn)在進行時和現(xiàn)在完成進行時表達出一種最近的和將要持續(xù)下去的狀態(tài)，切合題意，短語：gain popularity among… 在……流行起來；In recent years 近來等增加文章檔次。然后指出現(xiàn)象帶來的影響：Obviously，it is beneficial for us high school students. Firstly，by visiting those famous universities we can get to know more about them and can experience the academic atmosphere there. Secondly，these visits can inspire us to set higher goals and arouse our enthusiasm to work hard at our lessons.其中運用firstly，secondly等詞，使文章更有條理性。短語：be beneficial for… 對……有益，使文章更簡潔有力；However，the visits can have negative impacts on parts of the universities. Too many visitors on the campus can disturb the normal /span>school life there，which is a great pressure for the universities concerned. Furthermore，it may cause safety problems as well。However，承上啟下，很自然地引出下文的消極作用，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；短語：have negative impacts on… 對……有消極影響。最后用 In my opinion來表達自己的觀點。