12.假如你叫孫維,在去年夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的一個(gè)朋友Jim從英國(guó)給你寄來(lái)一件禮物------一件紅色的襯衫,并附有一封信.在信中他向你問(wèn)好,他想知道你近來(lái)在忙些什么.請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信表示感謝.回信要包括以下內(nèi)容:
(1)向Jim問(wèn)好并對(duì)他表示感謝.
(2)禮物是你最喜歡的顏色,尺寸很合適,你非常喜歡.
(3)告訴Jim你近來(lái)很好,上周剛過(guò)完生日,生日聚會(huì)很熱鬧.
(4)詢問(wèn)Jim近況,并表示希望他能來(lái)中國(guó).
注意:(1)詞數(shù):100--120個(gè)詞左右;
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Jim
First of all,thanks for your present,and I like this red shirt very much.Red is my favorate color,and its size is exact.I think this shirt fits me well.Thank you again!Recently,I am fine.Last week,I held a birthday party,and it's very wonderful.There are so many friends in my party that I feel happy.(高分句型一)It's a very unforgettable party.
How is it gong with you?There is no denying that China is a very great country with a long history,and it's beautiful.(高分句型二)I hope you can come to China.If you come,I will treat you well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Sun Wei.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息在去年夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的一個(gè)朋友Jim從英國(guó)給你寄來(lái)一件禮物------一件紅色的襯衫,并附有一封信.在信中他向你問(wèn)好,他想知道你近來(lái)在忙些什么.請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信表示感謝,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)向Jim問(wèn)好并對(duì)他表示感謝.(2)禮物是你最喜歡的顏色,尺寸很合適,你非常喜歡.(3)告訴Jim你近來(lái)很好,上周剛過(guò)完生日,生日聚會(huì)很熱鬧.(4)詢問(wèn)Jim近況,并表示希望他能來(lái)中國(guó). 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):First of all首先;Recently最近;There is no denying that…不可否認(rèn);
There are so many friends in my party that I feel happy.(高分句型一)
There is no denying that China is a very great country with a long history,and it's beautiful.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Jim,
      First of all,thanks for your present,and I like this red shirt very much.Red is my favorate color,and its size is exact.I think this shirt fits me well.Thank you again!Recently,I am fine.Last week,I held a birthday party,and it's very wonderful.There are so many friends in my party that I feel happy.(高分句型一)It's a very unforgettable party.
      How is it gong with you?There is no denying that China is a very great country with a long history,and it's beautiful.(高分句型二)I hope you can come to China.If you come,I will treat you well.
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Sun Wei

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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