Question

8．請仔細(xì)閱讀下面一段文字．文中共有10 處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單
詞的刪除、修改或者增加．
刪除：多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉；
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞；
…
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10 處錯誤，多者（從第11 處起）不計分．
The term"China one"refers the child who was born after the 1980s，when China launched the
one-child policy．Not only were they the family's only child，but they are also the family's center of attentions．Their parents and grandparents would spared no efforts in taking care of them，and would give them anything and everything，as if they are the"emperors"of their families．
As a result，most children of the"China one"generation lack in independence as they have
become so reliant （ the adjective of rely） on their families about support．Some parents even hire maid for their children when they go to college．Other unfavorable characteristics including：bad communication skills，rude，ungratefulness and self-centeredness．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了二十世紀(jì)八十年代以后，隨著獨生子女政策的出現(xiàn)，中國涌現(xiàn)了一大批獨生子女，他們作為家里唯一
孩子，備受家長寵愛，就像家里的"小皇帝"，這就造成了這些獨生子女缺乏獨立性，與人交往能力差，不知道感恩
，以自我為中心等一些不好的性格特點．

解答 The term"China one"refers∧the child who was born after the 1980s，when China launched the
                                       to
 one-child policy．Not only were they the family's only child，but they are also the family's
                                            are
center of attentions．Their parents and grandparents would spared no efforts in taking care of them，
             attention                                                              spare
and would give them anything and everything，as if they are the"emperors"of their families．As a
                                                                                  were
result，most children of the"China one"generation lack in independence as they have become so reliant
                                                                               去掉in       
（ the adjective of rely） on their families aboutsupport．Some parents even hire∧maid for their children
                                                                  for                                                   a      
when they go to college．Other unfavorable characteristics including：bad communication skills，rude，
                                                                                      include                                           rudeness
ungratefulness and self-centeredness．
1．refer后面加to；考查介詞，refer作為"談到，指"講時是不及物動詞，后面跟介詞后才可以跟賓語，refer to是固定用法．
2．were改為are；考查時態(tài)，not only…but（also）連接兩個對等的成分，時態(tài)上要保持一致，根據(jù)語境，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時．
3．a(chǎn)ttentions改為attention；考查名詞，attention作"注意"講，抽象名詞，不可數(shù)．
4．spared改為spare；考查動詞，情態(tài)動詞would后面要跟動詞原形，所以用spare．
5．a(chǎn)re改為were；考查時態(tài)，這是一個虛擬語氣條件句，表示不是客觀存在的事實，而是說話人的假設(shè)和推測，這種情況下
   要用過去時態(tài)．
6．去掉in；考查動詞，lack作為"缺乏"講是及物動詞，后面可以直接跟賓語．
7．a(chǎn)bout改為for；考查介詞，這里for意為"為了"表示目的，about則沒有這個用法．
8．maid前面加a；考查冠詞，maid（女仆）是可數(shù)名詞，前面加a表示一個．
9．including改為include；考查動詞，這里用動詞include作characteristics（性格）的謂語，including是介詞．
10．rude改為rudeness；考查名詞，這里名詞和前面的skills，后面的ungratefulness等并列作句子的賓語．

點評 短文改錯首先要整體理解短文，把握短文的中心思想，確定文章的基本時態(tài)，然后從語法，詞匯，固定搭配，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方
面詳細(xì)分析短文內(nèi)容，找出文中的錯誤并加以修改．