Question

【題目】 短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個樓字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

In China, there is a old saying that one’s hair and skin are given by his parents, so there is no right for him to change his skin. But as the development of high technology, more and more people chose to take the plastic surgery to make them look more perfectly. Many years ago, plastic surgery was very popular in Korea. Chinese people start to accept the plastic surgery because the influence of the Korean TV series. Though people can make themselves look more beautiful, but I don’t support the plastic surgery. People will hurt himself, for they don’t know the risk that they may face. What’s more, after the surgery, there are always side effects, that hurt people all the time. For the normal people, it is no need to change their face. The real beauty is from the soul, while the beauty gaining by surgery can’t change people’s soul.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】a --an

【2】as ---with

【3】chose --- choose

【4】perfectly --- perfect

【5】because后加of

【6】去掉but

【7】himself ---themselves

【8】that ---which

【9】it ---there

【10】gaining --- gained

【解析】

【1】a –an考查冠詞。old是元音字母開頭的單詞，所以冠詞用an，，在中國有一個古老的說法，故a –an

【2】as ---with考查介詞。但是隨著高科技的發(fā)展。故as ---with

【3】 chose --- choose考查動詞時態(tài)。本文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，所以動詞用一般現(xiàn)在式。故chose --- choose

【4】 perfectly --- perfect考查形容詞。系表結(jié)構(gòu)的表語一般用形容詞而不能用副詞做表語。look為系動詞后面要用形容詞perfect做表語。越來越多的人選擇接受整形手術(shù)使他們看起來更完美。故perfectly --- perfect

【5】because后加of考查連詞。 the influence of the Korean TV series是一個短語，不是一個完整的句子，故because后加of

【6】去掉but考查連詞。前半句有Though，后半句不用but，故去掉but

【7】himself ---themselves考查代詞。此處指代People是第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)，故代詞用themselves，故himself ---themselves

【8】that ---which考查關(guān)系詞。非限制定語從句引導(dǎo)詞用which。故that ---which

【9】it ---there考查介詞。對于一般人來說，是不需要改變臉的。故it ---there

【10】gaining --- gained考查動詞。此處表被動，通過手術(shù)得來的美無法改變?nèi)藗兊男撵`。故gaining --- gained