分析 本文的屬于提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作,要求對(duì)父母說(shuō)說(shuō)心里話(huà),話(huà)題切合考生實(shí)際,與考生的生活非常貼近,考生有話(huà)可說(shuō),有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性.要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式給出的,要求考生有較強(qiáng)的整合能力,在寫(xiě)作時(shí)充分利用連接詞,高級(jí)句型和詞匯,如果可能在文章結(jié)尾運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ),以使文章的層次更高.應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞,可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)的句式和高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)給文章增色.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了很多詞組:Thanks to 多虧,making remarkable progress 取得很大的進(jìn)步,made up my mind to 決定,make every effort to study努力學(xué)習(xí),the key to…的關(guān)鍵. 還使用了不少精典句式,如:Since it will be less than one month before the exam,I'm under great pressure now.這句話(huà)使用了固定句型,I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.這句話(huà)使用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)和which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.這句話(huà)使用了定語(yǔ)從句,Meanwhile,I will spare some time to participate in sports activities,aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies這句話(huà)使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ).文章還恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧怂渍Z(yǔ):Just as the saying goes,"no pains,no gains.".
解答 Dear Mom and Dad,
Entering Senior Three,I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!During the years,I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love.Thanks to your constant encouragement,I have been making remarkable progress in my study.(高分句型一)Since it will be less than one month before the exam,I'm under great pressure now.I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help,which contributes to my staying in a good state.(高分句型二)
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.I have made up my mind to make every effort to study,for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the saying goes,"no pains,no gains."Meanwhile,I will spare some time to participate in sports activities,aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy load of studies.(高分句型三) Mom and Dad,I am quite confident about my future.
Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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