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【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Mary is a 16-year-old high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary had great fun, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

【答案】

【1】devoted改為devotes

【2】class改為classes

【3】deeply改為deep

【4】too改為so

【5】去掉the

【6】while改為when

【7】加上with

【8】We改為They

【9】relaxing改為relaxed

【10】but改為and

【解析】

【1】devoted改為devotes;考查主謂一致。who引導的非限制性定語從句的主語是Mary，因此應該用第三人稱單數(shù)。故將devoted改為devotes。

【2】class改為classes;句意：她去了幾堂課。class為可數(shù)名詞。故將class改為classes。

【3】deeply改為deep;此處不是修飾動詞而是修飾名詞，所以不應該用副詞deeply。deep in night深夜。故將deeply改為deep。

【4】too改為so;固定用法。so … that太..以至于；too…to太…以至于不能。故將too改為so。

【5】去掉Sunday前面的the;固定用法。on Sunday在周末；in the morning在早上；on Sunday morning在周末早上。故去掉Sunday前面的the。

【6】while改為when;固定句式。be about to do sth ….when當…的時候正要做。故將while改為when。

【7】come up后加上with; 固定搭配。come up with 想出。故在come up后加上with。

【8】We改為They;考查代詞指代一致。整篇文章采用的是第二人稱的角度。前面提到了she和her father。故將We改為They。

【9】relaxing改為relaxed;考查動詞的形容詞形式。relax的形容詞有兩個形式。一是relaxing令人放松的，主要用于形容事物；二是relaxed放松的，主要是修飾人。故將relaxing改為relaxed。

【10】but改為and;考查連詞。energetic充滿活力的，active活躍的，積極的。這兩個詞是同一類型的詞，所以不存在轉折關系。故將but改為and。

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