Question

12．假定你是李華．你收到了美國(guó)朋友彼得寄來(lái)的最新英文小說(shuō)．請(qǐng)給他回信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．小說(shuō)收到；
2．回贈(zèng)禮物；
3．禮物意義；
4．邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈(zèng)禮物以及禮物意義）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 解析
這是一篇關(guān)于禮物的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一感謝禮物；二回贈(zèng)禮物以及禮物意義；三邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞a lovely gift，和such呼應(yīng)．
感謝你這份可愛(ài)的禮物，這一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞Paper cutting．
剪紙是中國(guó)文化傳承的獨(dú)特形式之一，它經(jīng)常用于裝飾歡樂(lè)氣氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
      I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈(zèng)禮物以及禮物意義）
      Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．