Question

【題目】你所居住的小區(qū)附近有個垃圾處理場。每天焚燒工業(yè)垃圾所產(chǎn)生的煙塵都對大氣造成污染，直接影響人體健康，并導(dǎo)致癌癥患病率的上升。請你以 “Stop burning industrial rubbish”為題給某著名英語報寫一篇文章呼吁人們不要焚燒工業(yè)垃圾。

注意：

1. 內(nèi)容包括提出問題、分析問題并給出解決建議。

2. 詞數(shù)100左右，標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：處理場 treatment plant 小區(qū) neighborhood

Stop burning industrial rubbish

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Answer 1

【答案】

Stop burning industrial rubbish

A few days ago, a rubbish treatment plant was founded near our neighborhood, which burns garbage every day. They think it simple and economical to get rid of rubbish that way. I don’t think it proper to clear away rubbish that way. It’s well-known that burning rubbish, especially industrial rubbish, gives off poisonous smoke and dust which in turn pollute air. As a result of breathing the polluted air, the number of the people suffering from cancer is increasing sharply. Many things in rubbish such as dry leaves, leftover food, etc. can make very good fertilizer. And some chemicals which give off poisonous gases when burned should be sorted, recycled and used again as producing materials.

【解析】

試題分析：文章已給出了標題,反映焚燒垃圾及帶來危害的問題。以第一人稱口吻。所看到的焚燒垃圾這一現(xiàn)象應(yīng)用一般過去時,闡述個人觀點應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作要點：(1)所見：前幾天去火車站為朋友送行,路上看到清潔工人正在焚燒垃圾；(2)危害：產(chǎn)生的煙塵會對大氣造成污染,直接影響人體健康,并可能導(dǎo)致癌癥；(3)呼吁：不要焚燒垃圾

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語get rid of擺脫；give off發(fā)出；As a result of作為。。的結(jié)果；suffer from 遭受；A few days ago, a rubbish treatment plant was founded near our neighborhood, which burns garbage every day.這個句子which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；It’s well-known that burning rubbish, especially industrial rubbish, gives off poisonous smoke and dust which in turn pollute air這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是that引導(dǎo)的主語從句；