請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇吸煙危害的短文.

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):

吸煙會(huì)導(dǎo)致許多疾病,甚至一些危及生命的疾病.

吸煙不但對(duì)吸煙者自己有害,也嚴(yán)重影響不吸煙者的健康.

據(jù)報(bào)道,美國(guó)每年至少有32萬(wàn)人因吸煙而喪生.目前約有四千萬(wàn)人仍在吸煙.

可喜的是,越來(lái)越多的人已認(rèn)識(shí)到其危害,開(kāi)始戒煙.

青年學(xué)生不應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成這一惡習(xí),如有這一習(xí)慣,應(yīng)盡早戒除.

I think smoking is harmful to our health．I hope that smokers will give up smoking from now on. Smoking cigarettes can lead to heart disease, cancer and other health problems．As we know ,it dose great harm not only to smokers themselves, but also to those who don‘t smoke.

It is reported that at least three hundred and twenty thousand Americans are killed by smoking each year．And about 40 million smokers continue to smoke cigarettes today．Fortunately, more and more people have come to realize the danger of smoking and begin to stop it.

As a result, you shouldn’t form such a habit．I hope you will make up your mind to stop smoking, for it is easy to do away with cigarettes in the beginning

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。這篇習(xí)作所需內(nèi)容已經(jīng)全部以中文形式提供給考生，因此需要在已提供內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上，對(duì)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行整合，達(dá)到最好的表達(dá)效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章第一段第一句話(huà)概括地講述了吸煙所帶來(lái)的不好的身體影響，然后再具體說(shuō)出已提供內(nèi)容，用的很好。在最后一段，又巧妙地使用了it is easy to do away with cigarettes in the beginning說(shuō)明才發(fā)生就戒除要容易得多，鼓勵(lì)青少年下定決心戒煙。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱式作文

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